This is getting to where my mind was with this. Highlight the word RAMS in dreamers. The school was once the Frayser High School Rams and I want to continue that ram as the mascot.
The dreamers font in entry 18 is not quite there- Try the Capital letters with a brighter yellow for the word rams. I Also thought about the star hovering above his hand could be a globe as the "dreamer" who is the graduate has the world at his fingertips. You clearly are in sync with what we want to see- Great work
There has been some talk about the age of the graduate and if we can use the likeness of Dr. King. Can you replace the likeness of Dr. King with a more teenage like figure representing the age of our students. We will then choose between the 2. 27 and 31 are the two that we would like to see what they look like with the younger charactrer