Franklin First FinancialLogo Design Contest

Love this.....can you use a darker green?

Lots of people love this.......we need the financial not to be disguised....please work on some variations, a lot of people really think this is the winner.

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thanks for your feedback, i really appreciate it, work on it now

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dije

#91 solid, need the financial to be a little darker shade of grey, also try another variation of that brown, just slightly darker, and maybe a few differentiated fonts.

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revision comes i hope you like it
#96 #95

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dije

comes with the new darker brown at "franklin" #107 #106

#96 is stellar. I think the light brown needs to be a little darker. The word Franklin specifically.

I also think Franklin first should be about 15% larger

Actually you did it already, thanks!

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anymore request for the better result.... just feel free to contact me if you need more revision or adjustment.
i will be gladly to help

thanks in advance
dije

THANKS!

#107 is liked by many. Here is what we want to tweak. We would like the Franklin First word to be longer, change the spacing a little and make the text overall about 15% larger....

Try a few different fonts that you think will look good. Right now you are clear #1

revision comes, also with the different font #126 #127 #128

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dije

It is still not right, all the text needs to be about 25% larger

how about this #129 #130

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just feel free to contact me if you need more revision or adjustment.

thanks in advance
dije

#130 is great. Can we make any final enhancements?

sure you can... i'm here to offer the best for your business, just feel free

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dije

I meant can you try to make it cooler by adding some shadow and 3d style effects

revision comes #146

#146 is very cool, but the Franklin First looks set back now, we want that in the forefront

more shadow comes #151 #152 #153 #154

I don't like the effects. Lets try something else please

i will try to place the pen into some where, wait a minutes

Still not there.......

honestly, my concept of financial is in front of the franklin, the financial flat in the ground, like pen writing on the book. its a little hard to make on the back of franklin, other wish i place the franklin in front of the financial...

how you opinion?

thanks in advance
dije

Work on #146, make the Franklin First larger so it is more pronounced, and try a few other fonts

I like #193, but put a little more spacing between Franklin & First....

now #199 have a space between

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just feel free to contact me if you need more revision or adjustment.
thanks in advance
dije

#199 make the color of the feather match the color of the word Franklin.

revision comes #209...

thanks in advance
dije