Thank you for submitting.
#17 very busy and not the direction I want to go.
#16 - colors off a bit, need royal/bright blue and bright green - 2 colors only.
I like the figure on the right, not the one on the left. Text is boxy, need more fluid/soft feel.
Can you try something with that asthetic
#15 -not my take and image looks froggish
#14 like the movement in the graphic but need to clearly tell what it is.
I look forward to seeing what you have.
Thanks!