Hi Suke,
So hard to decide, a few great choices.
So far it is between you and another designer.
A few things -hands still not right, seems to be what my eyes go to. Maybe not include hands per say but out stretched arms???
Font still off a bit, change up a few.
Position dancer to left of words.
music notes need to be a bit thicker in width so they can be noticed when on a printed t shirt.
71 is best regarding swirl effect.