Thank you for your submission. Here are some additional tips.
1. Character should have clear facial features to make look more realistic. For instance, I want to be able to make out the eye color. If I zoom in, what would it look like. This needs to look great, enlarged on the side of a van.
2. We want the character to be a Knight, not a superhero. The superhero example image provided in the contest inspiration was to show the realism level we are looking for.
3. The character is too serious looking and muscular
4. The character needs to be tied into pool cleaning and play along with the Fortress / Knight concept.
Thank you. I think it is promising, but not quite there. I will review it with my team and try ton provide specific feedback to help improve it to align with our expectations. Stay tuned for feedback.
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1. Character should have clear facial features to make look more realistic. For instance, I want to be able to make out the eye color. If I zoom in, what would it look like. This needs to look great, enlarged on the side of a van.
2. We want the character to be a Knight, not a superhero. The superhero example image provided in the contest inspiration was to show the realism level we are looking for.
3. The character is too serious looking and muscular
4. The character needs to be tied into pool cleaning and play along with the Fortress / Knight concept.
Hi, Sir
In this logo, i make it with different composition, so the mascot is eye-catching with the company name below.