Fortress Pool ServiceLogo Design Contest

I see you have already focused on one design that you want. So there is no possibility for me. So I withdrew all my designs.

Why did you withdrawl all of yours?

Can you remove the flippers on this version? I believe that's the direction we are going in

There is too much of the same color family in this. When I asked for more color in the armor, I was thinking a variety of colors. Your first submission was all blue tones and this one is all purple tones. That takes away from the realism that we are trying to achieve.

Thank you for the revised concept. I don't think I like it better than your #14 and #17 submissions. I do like that you've provided more color options for us to consider with the purple.

One of the issues with this logo is that the level of detail in the face now doesn't match the rest of the logo. For instance the definition in the the eyes is much stronger than the hands.

Same comments that I sent to the other logo variation

Thank you for your submission. It's a very nice logo and a top contender, but needs some more work to be considered a potential winner. Here are some additional tips.

1. Character should have clear facial features to make look more realistic. Yours is very close, but for instance, I want to be able to make out the eye color. If I zoom in, what would it look like. This needs to look great, enlarged on the side of a van.

2. The character needs more color variation in the armor and look more realistic. e.g. definition in the hands and muscles.

No gloves on #17. Please check it. Thanks!

Please check the update on #15 with more transparent goggles, and #16 with no goggles.

This is good. One of the best so far. I think the facial features need to be larger and more defined to the point where you could see the actual eye color.

Is there any way ton show more skin? Perhaps remove the gloves?

Can you incorporate the purples and yellows from the Fortress Pool Service version of the logo.