Fortress Pool ServiceLogo Design Contest

Seems you didnt like my version with a knight posing like a superhero aquaman, so I try this version with the knight just standing.

I like the smiling ones better.

Please check #37. I also made versions with the character alone to make it look closer, #39 and #38-without goggles. Please do not hesitate to ask if you want any changes. Thanks! God bless!

Thank you for the feedback. About the facial features, Is it okay not to copy from the original facial expression like the lips? Okay I will make some revisions with regarding the color of the armor and thicker the body of the character. God bless!

Hello - This is definitely in the right direction and one of the best submissions, but it does need more work to be a top contender.

Here are some additional tips.

1. Character should have clear facial features to make look more realistic. For instance, I want to be able to make out the eye color. Your version is close, but if I zoom in, what would it look like. This needs to look really good blown up on the side of a van.

2. The character is too skinny and the armor needs more variation of color in it.

Thank you very much. Please do not hesitate to ask if you want any changes. God bless!

These are very strong entries. I like the direction and have ranked this design high.