Fortress Pool ServiceLogo Design Contest

This looks like a superhero with a funny helmet on. I appreciate the creativity, but it needs to be a knight and have a tie into the pool cleaning concept.

Thank you for your submission. Here are some additional tips.

1. Character should have clear facial features to make look more realistic. For instance, I want to be able to make out the eye color. If I zoom in, what would it look like. This needs to look great, enlarged on the side of a van.

2. We want the character to be a Knight, not a superhero. The superhero example image provided in the contest inspiration was to show the realism level we are looking for.

3. The character is too muscular

4. The character needs more color variation in the armor

Thanks for revising. The character is still lacking the life-like appearance and detail we want.

I'm not sure what it is that I am having trouble putting my finger on.

Perhaps its the color saturation or the way the colors blend into each other without clear distinction. I'm sorry if that doesn't make sense.

We would also suggest making the character less handsome and almost a bit goofy. He still looks too serious and put together.

Thank you, I will do it as you requested.

This is promising and one of the best submitted yet. I have a few requested changes to strength the logo.

- I would like the character to look a little less intimidating and friendly. We want a more approachable vibe.

-If we can somehow tie in the pool cleaning aspect into the character. The original logo had goggles and a pool cleaning wand. Perhaps something like that?

- Please incorporate the current Fortress Pool Service Logo (lettering) and colors of purple, yellow, and blue. Or, keep the colors of the mascot the same but somehow incorporate hints of the purple and yellow to make it cohesive with our current logo lettering.