Wow! I really like this design concept but now there is no time for revisions - My first impression of the girl was that she looks to be about 12 years old - which I didn't think was a problem until I showed it to some women and they said it made them feel as if the website wouldn't carry shoes for them. My target audience is between 22 - 48. I would need the girl to look at least like she is in her mid twenties - thirties. other than that I think it's great.
You can still get revisions after the contest ends. The designer ranked first can submit revisions, but you can re-rank freely while in judging mode. You have 7 days to select a winner too!
I think the woman has changed too much - it disrupting the balance - Perhaps just change the shoes to something more sophisticated - I really like the symmetry of the first design