I like your lettering in entry #23. can you make put the rice hat over the "i" instead of at the end? Also, try making the hat more minimalist with just a couple lines ^. Thank you.
I like #69 the best so far. Try making the hat black and maybe give the "i" some arms or try playing around with some ideas to make it look more humanistic
Alright I really like 84 and 85. Can you try taking the bottom line off of the hat to make it even more simplistic to see what it looks like? Thank you