Yours is the only one we like with a separate icon and we like the icon. The yellow tagline is a littl hard to see, but we like the direction here...a lot.
THis color gold does look better and we'll have to deal with our marketing team, since it not the same color yellow as our suburst logo, so we may have to go back to that.
Close, but we weren't thinking the ENTIRE tagline turns blue only the word "Focus" in the tagline "Bringing Service into Focus" would be turned blue with the other words in gold.