Flour BloomLogo Design Contest

#7, #8, #9

Hi,
These are my first ideas for your logo. Please let me know if you'd like any revisions. Thanks!
Pam

#7 I really like the color of the box surrounding the owl. However, the flour bag concept is too literal. Scrap that and redesign the owl to be playful & whimsical. Font style is too simple. Would like to see something sophisticated & playful. Don't like the shade of pink used in "bloom".

OK. Thanks for the feedback. I'll revise my design accordingly. Pam :)

Comment for entry #18

Hi,
Here's a revision of #7. I changed the owl - made it more whimsical. Changed the font to a sophisticated but playful font, and changed the color of 'bloom'. Let me know if you'd like any revisions on this entry. Thanks!
Pam

#18 Love the slogan font. Keep that. The owl needs to be more proportionate to the words. Can you either make it the same size as the font or smaller. Right now, the owl and words don't seem cohesive. I initially liked the color block behind the owl, but think it's contributing to the owl and business name not feeling cohesive. Can you do a version where the owl is gray w/ the whimsy design?

Hi,
Thanks for the feedback. I'll make the revisions and resubmit. :)
Pam

#40 is the revision of #18. Changed the owl to gray and reduced it in size. Omitted the color block behind it.

#41, #42, #43, #44, #45 - variations with different text treatment and placement. Added the spoon, chef's hat, etc.

#44 I really like the font. Need to make some adjustments with the owl. Can you make the owl shorter and a little fatter. Also, would like to see the pupils smaller. I don't like the slogan curved. Can you also change the batter color to one of the shades of purple?

Sure, I can make those revisions! Thanks for the feedback! Pam

#78

Hi,
Here's the revision of entry #44. Shorter & fatter owl, smaller pupils, straight slogan, purple batter.

Please let me know if there is anything else I can revise. I'd be happy to provide any revisions you might want to see.

Thanks!

Pam

Hi Pam

I truly appreciate all the revisions you've done, but I'm still not keen on the owl. It's not quite what I'm looking for. Can you maybe try another owl design that still has the whimsy design on the belly?
The proportions are still off on #78. The owl is too round. I like the smaller pupils, but realizing that I don't like the blue eyes. Thanks so much!

That's no problem. I'll work on him until I get it right for you. Thanks for the feedback! Pam :)

Any better?

(This comment references Entry #99)

#99 I'm sorry, but this version isn't working either. Can you try a completely different style of owl. I know you've tried to modify the one you had from the start, but I don't think you can alter it any further.

ok.

#109 doesn't work either. Thank you so much for all your ideas. i really do appreciate the time you put into them. all.