Hi there, I tried to copy your design the best I could. What is it in particular that you don't like about all four entries? Is it the horizontal lines?
Sorry for the delay. I have been traveling. The FONT is a little to RETRO. The button has sort of lived its life but you brought a different feel to the designs. It took me a while but I can see you are trying to get there. I like the openness of the top 2 DESIGNS that drag out over the name. It shows movement.
Entry 13 & 14 have crisp swoops where yours is a gentle sweeping road. Not sure this is helpful for you but your road is distinct.
Don't worry about colors as you can change them easily. Lay it out there. See if it can be a non-button abstract. Round is fine just don't BUTTON-TIZE it.