Five RhinosLogo Design Contest

Here is my entry. Comments welcomed, Thanks and good luck, Pat

(This comment references Entry #137)

I like the idea, but not the rhino image itself.

Thanks for the comments, Tweaked the design a bit, and worked up a new illustration of the rhino. Additional comments would be great!.. Thanks again, Pat

(This comment references Entry #145)

Can it see with the color scheme of the logo currently ranked # 1? What is above the "i" in Five? I can't tell.

It's entry # 134 that I'm referring to.

Also, can I see it without the blue circle around the rhino? (I figured out what is about the "i". The rhino's smashing the F! Brilliant!

Thanks for your feedback, Here are the designs revised per your comments. Any additional advice would be great, Thanks and good luck, Pat

(This comment references Entry #158)

Just wondering... why does the rhino only have 3 legs? (I know someone will ask me.)

Front left leg is behind his right, But what I wlll do is add some gray to it like his back so you can see it better, if you would like.

Thanks Pat

Oh, I see it now. You don't need to change it. Can you make the "5" shadow be right side up? I'm really liking this design.

Or maybe take off the "5" shadow altogether? That might make it better for business card use. Thanks.

Thanks for the additional comments, Here is the revised design, you need any thing else just let me know.
thanks, Pat

(This comment references Entry #191)

I just wanted to see a version without the "5" shadow if you get a chance.

Here is the revised design with out the "5" Shadow, had to enlarge the subhead to fill in the space and to make it balanced. Just let me know what you think and we will go from there. Thanks, Pat

(This comment references Entry #206)