Five Bar SystemsLogo Design Contest

Nice start! #7 a bit too agressive and uneven. #5 is top so far, but perhaps reverse the bars to be pointing up. Thanks, great effort!

thanks for feedback!
i have made a fev option again, please check..#22, #23, #24

a question,
as in your brief, you re looking for a "LOGO" that can stand alone even without company name right? (like #5)
or you looking for a logo that incorporated with the text? (wordmark, like #24)

thank you

Hi, thanks for your revisions. You are definitely a top contender and have grabbed my personal tastes and to the brief quite well. I will be meeting with my partners this week for discussions, however, the positive feeback has been from #22, #23 and #24 (my personal preference of all the designs you've done with the wordmark).

Initially I was set on having a stand-alone logo, however, the wordmark options that have been submitted have been excellent and have opened it up to those also.

I really like the concept behind #64 - the only thing that I'm not a fan of is the bars pointing down - albeit that they form part of the wordmark.

Again, thanks for your contributions, they have been fantastic to date!

thanks!! just let me know if you have any directions ...!

#127 . B&W version.
i just want to let you know that a good logo MUST be readable even in black & white.
and not too busy so they are still clearly readable even you only have a small space for them.

regards.

#22 - thanks, this looks like the winner to me. Just to confirm, this is still only 2 PMS colours - correct?

Thanks

YEP...i make a new version that ONLY using 2 PMS color for you in entry #130.
let me know if you have more question.

in my opinion, using only 2 PMS color means no gradient & glass effect etc..only 2 solid color..so they like #130

Hi there, you have done a wonderful job with the logo and refinements - however, I would really like to see a concept with the logo from #192 and the text from #22.

I have asked the same question of #192 - would you be willing to create a concept between the two using the logo of #192 and the font/layout of #22?

Thanks!

Iam sorry I cant do that because logotournament.com not allow using other designer CONCEPT / IDEA who have submit first. we all here respect to that rule & respect to all the designers concept.

here are the rule from logotournament for CH:
Contest Holder Guidelines for posting
We require that you do not ask one designer to use elements or concepts from another Designer. The general rule is that, if a Designer was the first to submit the idea, they essentially own that concept or idea for the remainder of the contest. Requests or ideas you have put in your contest Brief are fair game and open to everyone. Concepts that are considered obvious will also be fair game, for example: a dog & cat for a pet hospital, shopping bag for an e-commerce company, a tooth for a dentist, initials for a lawyer, etc.

hope you can understand that.
but i can still tweak & modify the logo again if you want but i cant using others concept:)

let me know

regards
a.p