Hi, thanks for you submissions! I have had positive feedback from #27 and #60, however, I am not sure about the text on #60 - I think it is a little too aggressive.
#27 - could we please see a concept with a thinner version of the font on the word "BAR" (so they are clearly defined as two words), the word "SYSTEMS" the same width as "BAR" and the word "BAR" in a 50% shade of the "SYSTEMS" colour? Also, a concept with the word "SYSTEMS" as is with the other changes?