thanks for the feedback.. and you can comment my submission in here, personally.. :) here you are my updates, a visual of healthy people.. and more to come..
I really like #19 and #20. These are great layouts.
Looking at it now, I'm wondering what it would look like if you took those layouts and used two people instead on just one. I know I had said one before.
If you could take the layout from #19 and #20 and use the two poeple from #7 and #8 with the swoopstyle from #17 encapsulating the entire logo that would look really cool.
I just need to see a few more versions of Upper case and Lower Case "FMG" and "fmg". The font styles in #10, #19, #20, and #21 are the best.
Also, different color variations such as black that fades to a more metallic color. Any luck with "shimmering" or "shine" effects?... Much like Chome shining off a Custom Motorcycle in the Summer Sun!! "Gleaming" effect.
I do also like the swoop style in #20 and #21 as well. I would like to see variations of the horizontal swoop and the angled swoop to get a better idea from all angles.
Your renderings have been great.
If you could make the two people in #7 and #8, look more like the person in #19, #20, and #21, that might also look really cool. "Legless".
Keep them coming WUderland, More variations of the swoop, two people instead of just one, and Upper Case and Lower case versions of "FMG"/"fmg".
Looking at it even further, I really like the layout of #17 as well. If we can get the symbol spot on, and seperate from the letters "fmg" and the Title, "Fitness Management Group", that would look cool as well.
Like taking the concept from #17 and replacing the symbol with #19, and using the font style from some of the others that used font that had edges but had curves and looked futuristic and modern.
i already sent you the update logo... the submit time is running out now, if you like my submission and still want to finalize it when you in JUDGING time, you can choose my best logo to be your 1st rank (temporary).. it's the rules of Logo Tournament, and after that if you satisfied and already decide the best logo, so you will have it..
hope i can be the best.. i will be ready, anytime.. :D
Too tough to call, so we're extending this tournament a bit further. The creativity is awesome!! The Logo for the website is almost there.
We've narrowed the 75 entries down to the top 8. #62, #48, #69, #19, #56, #70, #13, and #37.
They have the best movement and style. I like how the logo is seperated from the rest. That is important because sometimes we might want to just have the Logo and just the letters "fmg".
The Lower Case lettering is the best. The Font in #69, and #37 is the best so far with #48 and #19 being second.
** i'm wondering if there are ways to incorporate the "Atom" Symbol and the "Power" Symbol into these designs as well somehow? **
I'd love to take what is out there and just incorporate more sweeping and swooping designs. Something that is really moving forward fast!! like a "Tidal Wave" or sweeping like the "Rings of Saturn".
Our organization is truly ahead of its time and completely stands alone in the industry. We need a Logo that does the same. It has to be futuristic, move fast, very sweeping and swooping, tell a story, have Lower Case lettering, but be confident and modest.
Our company deals with driving Personal Training revenue for Health Clubs THROUGH THE ROOF!! We're dealing with Club Owners, Personal Trainers, Clients, Members, etc.
Our company is "Scientific" and "Physiological". We're all about "Performance" and generating "Revenue". We're "Modest", "Confident", and "Futuristic". At the same time, we're "Helpful", "Bonding", and focus hard on "Achievement" and "Finally reaching your goals."
Keep coming with all of the awesome designs, you are doing great!!
With #48, #52, and #19, could we try putting "FITNESS MANAGEMENT GROUP" in upper case lettering where it is underneath "fmg"?
Also, in #48, the swoop around the people is straight and in #52 the swoop is angled. Do you have anymore sizes and angles or even double swoops to even try out?... Like criss-crossing swoops, much like the "Atom" symbol?
this is the update for you.. a couple alternative with a new swoosh style, and i try another idea that having a speed visual like a running man, dynamic and simple modern... #95 #96 #97
very interesting competition, i really want to do the best for you.. :)
Is there a way to put a line 2/3 of the way through the lettering of these. If you look at "Anytime Fitness" The lettering looks "cut in half" by something.
Like cutting 2/3 of the letters "fmg" by a laser or something with all the movement from before.