First and UnionLogo Design Contest

Thank you for your entry.

This one has a bit too much flourish with the ampersand, but I like the font you've chosen for the text. The icon above the i is a nice splash of color, but may not work for us.

Could you try this without the ampersand or dots above the i and on a white background?

If you want to add other touches, relate them to content.

Thank you for feedback. There are some changes.

(This comment references Entry #116)

Could you try this without the ampersand and maybe do a more polished variation of the one on fnu.serveronline.net ?

and I forgot to thank you for the current variation, sorry.

#196 & #197

Thanks for your entry.

The color, simplicity and integration of text is really nice on these.

I don't think a serif font will work with our site. (firstandunion.com (the logo will go to the left and the menu will move up into the blue))

Could you please try with a sans-serif font?

I'll move them into "not interested" just to clear the entries, but both are clean and nice.

Thank you for feedback. Here are sans serif logos.

(This comment references Entry #248)

#248 and #249

I really like the simplicity of these, something holds them together.

Can that quality come out even more? Are there some other subtle changes that could happen?

Sorry for the unclear feedback, I may be overlooking the strength of clarity and simplicity of these, but just want it to go up a little notch. Maybe it is tweaks to kerning, tagline size (maybe a little small)...not sure just reaching a little bit.

Thanks very much.

Thank you. There are a little changes. Different kerning and smaller tagline.

(This comment references Entry #350)

#350

The "First" "Union" is stronger, but the and and tagline feel weaker, can they stay strong and clear.

To my untrained eye, the "union" looks perfectly kerned, while the "first" looks a little less cohesive.

I'll move it out of the lineup for now, but definitely like the new strength of the name

New entry with separated f and i

(This comment references Entry #367)

#367

More folks from our company are weighing in. There is some reluctance for them to go with a text only logo. Could you add a variation of this logo with an ampersand. Please keep the simplicity of #367 with a simple ampersand.

I'm going to move the current logo down, but we will probably take the full period to decide.

Logo with ampersand

(This comment references Entry #409)

Thank you for #438,

can you intergrate the ampersand a bit more so it fills the space and flows into the "n", and maybe also try this wiht an "and"?

If this is all too much feedback, my apologies, please decide which comments from me work or don't in how you see the design.

I appreciate every feedback. It's an "and" option.

(This comment references Entry #446)