First and UnionLogo Design Contest

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Thank you for #404
The eye kind of stops at Union because of the solid base, any way to help the eye flow into the tagline?

The ampersand is cool the way it is integrated, the right top kind of slams into the S, can it flow like it does with the O below?

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Here is new version as per your request

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