Hello :)
This one I had to raise the font a little...but I did direct on the font ( not stretch ). I think with the circle up their, it gives the illusion that the guys is more down then the one with out the circle...I hope I am making sense!...just wanted to give you all the possible good submission for your client! :)
Hello :)
I gave you two version one with the half circle on top and the other with...and raise the guy just a little...almost same position as ( the number two rank right now )...Me I really like the number one rank right now...it looks complete with the circle.
Let me know if their is anything else..anything at all :)
B&W is fine. I meant to have the helmet coming as high as it was on #61 (youd probably have to increase font size to fill in empty space). However what you've done gives the impression of low sholders on the rider, which is also pretty neat!
just wanted to add some color....is their a two color tone you like? or its black and orange...I wanted to do a more vintage black and orange...hope its ok!..:)
Nailed it w/ the shape of the bars/headlight/lever.
I'd like to see a version of this that doesn't adhere so much to being 1 contiguous shape.
It's fine to drop the rectangle around fireup & I'd be curious what the handlebars look like filled in black w, a bit of white spacing where they intersect the circle.
... or maybe just the grips filled in?
Something isn't quite sitting right about the bars being all white.
Its ok, I never look at other designer...plus you have the existing logo of the company...I think you want uss to be as close as we can to the others...
Can we see it with straight bars?
The trajectory of the handlebars coming out of the headlight is perfect - Just don't have them curve/angle at all, where they currently curve, just add the grips+levers. + white stroke around them as they cross over the outer circle.
That should allow you to move the typography down and increase the size of it + helmet.
I like the helmet shape - and I can appreciate the angles being created w/ the bars, but i'm concerned they've reached 'chopper' proportions! which isn't the style they handle.
If you were to use a headlight/bar style similar to what you have ranking - blow it up and cut off any elements under the headlight, maybe add a single or double 'gauge' on top of the headlight, - that would top your last ranked!
Is this a better one, I try to make the handles be more uniform to the whole design. and I made the helmet better I believed. Would you like to see it in black and white......I plan to regain my thrône :)
Looking good! - can we make the body of the bike under the headlight bulkier?
Also the goggles; feel a little too buggy. I'm not sure what it is exactly, because other designs seem very similar, it may be the scale of each goggle lens to the headlight (almost the same).
I'd say scrap the strap, it adds too much movement, and if it were less flow-y it wouldn't look much like a strap.
The typography w/ 3 font sizes is also showing a bit too much movement and I get a sense of playfulness, if it were either outlined and skewed/bulged or kept to 2 font sizes i think it would solve that.
I can't help but think 'scooter' still w/ the general shape of the bike, maybe angle them down more as in your other ranking design.
Hello :)
here you go, what you think of these submission, I made the lines thicker...and with the brake it looks like meaner :) ...and I hope the goggles look better...Let me know :)
Ok cool :) that helps a lot :)
I will use your comments and come up with something. that really help on your feedback! :)
but keep it simple, correct..no details..cause I believe he wants to use it like a patch...I know I have experience in designing patches for shirts...
1. As far as the handlebars, I think the issue is the thin-ness of the levers. I'd almost prefer they be thicker, and w/ grip indentations, maybe they could be made thicker to work though! The overall shape of the bars - I unfortunately do not have input about, he has liked a variety of the ones submitted.
Hello :)
Thank you, for sure I can do that!
1. il make the handles more FIERCER
( would you have a google image to show me what kind of handle bar you want, if not its ok..il create one )
2. Goggles, oh for sure I can make them more like biker googles...( again would you have a google image to show me, what kind of google...no worries if not...il take care of it ;)
3. il use a font more retro...but keep it simple...( would you have a google image of what kind of font or style. )
4. and il make it close as the original one too...
This will help to achieve the exact vision you have, if not no worries..I will submit shortly and we can go from their. if you have any thoughts on this let me know!...We get it done :)
I realized - this one looks so clean it also looks modern. I hope thats not too contradictory, to want it looking 'retro' and 'simple' . But this design is closest to what they are looking for! just bring back a bit more of the original logo and add retro!
Love the simplicity of it. Couple changes would really help -
1. Cycle looks a bit scooter-ish. Maybe larger headlight, 'fiercer' handlebars.
2. Goggles don't look quite right, seem closer to scuba mask then bike goggles.
Great work!
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just let me know if their is anything else!
thank you
This one I had to raise the font a little...but I did direct on the font ( not stretch ). I think with the circle up their, it gives the illusion that the guys is more down then the one with out the circle...I hope I am making sense!...just wanted to give you all the possible good submission for your client! :)
I gave you two version one with the half circle on top and the other with...and raise the guy just a little...almost same position as ( the number two rank right now )...Me I really like the number one rank right now...it looks complete with the circle.
Let me know if their is anything else..anything at all :)
Awsome!!
Here you go, is this what you mean.
How about color Scheme...or he likes it black and white.
thank you!
Just three submission with other font change!..just to see!..
Just wanted to try the top part REVERSE in the black and White...so it cuts on the design a little!
Nailed it w/ the shape of the bars/headlight/lever.
I'd like to see a version of this that doesn't adhere so much to being 1 contiguous shape.
It's fine to drop the rectangle around fireup & I'd be curious what the handlebars look like filled in black w, a bit of white spacing where they intersect the circle.
... or maybe just the grips filled in?
Something isn't quite sitting right about the bars being all white.
just made the title bigger,
quick question..are my lever ok...I mean the position...?
what you think of this one!
THe outline of the handle bar makes it less parts int he logo..more of a one piece!
Can we see it with straight bars?
The trajectory of the handlebars coming out of the headlight is perfect - Just don't have them curve/angle at all, where they currently curve, just add the grips+levers. + white stroke around them as they cross over the outer circle.
That should allow you to move the typography down and increase the size of it + helmet.
I was wondering would you like a version with less ( a little ) curves in the handle. or this is ok!...
If you were to use a headlight/bar style similar to what you have ranking - blow it up and cut off any elements under the headlight, maybe add a single or double 'gauge' on top of the headlight, - that would top your last ranked!
I see I lost my thrône, hehehe
Is this a better one, I try to make the handles be more uniform to the whole design. and I made the helmet better I believed. Would you like to see it in black and white......I plan to regain my thrône :)
Also the goggles; feel a little too buggy. I'm not sure what it is exactly, because other designs seem very similar, it may be the scale of each goggle lens to the headlight (almost the same).
I'd say scrap the strap, it adds too much movement, and if it were less flow-y it wouldn't look much like a strap.
The typography w/ 3 font sizes is also showing a bit too much movement and I get a sense of playfulness, if it were either outlined and skewed/bulged or kept to 2 font sizes i think it would solve that.
I can't help but think 'scooter' still w/ the general shape of the bike, maybe angle them down more as in your other ranking design.
here you go, what you think of these submission, I made the lines thicker...and with the brake it looks like meaner :) ...and I hope the goggles look better...Let me know :)
I will use your comments and come up with something. that really help on your feedback! :)
but keep it simple, correct..no details..cause I believe he wants to use it like a patch...I know I have experience in designing patches for shirts...
Thank you, for sure I can do that!
1. il make the handles more FIERCER
( would you have a google image to show me what kind of handle bar you want, if not its ok..il create one )
2. Goggles, oh for sure I can make them more like biker googles...( again would you have a google image to show me, what kind of google...no worries if not...il take care of it ;)
3. il use a font more retro...but keep it simple...( would you have a google image of what kind of font or style. )
4. and il make it close as the original one too...
This will help to achieve the exact vision you have, if not no worries..I will submit shortly and we can go from their. if you have any thoughts on this let me know!...We get it done :)
1. Cycle looks a bit scooter-ish. Maybe larger headlight, 'fiercer' handlebars.
2. Goggles don't look quite right, seem closer to scuba mask then bike goggles.
Great work!
just wanted to do a version more simplified!
just wanted to add a little more character to the Font.