I am assuming as finalist you can now see the other four designers submissions as well. Is this correct?
There are elements of each one that we really like. There are also elements that are missing from each one. Please take a look and see if you can come up with a variation of your logo that has the following characteristics:
Communicate the four areas of focus (Sports, Fitness, Adventure, and Trainings) with icons subtly incorporated into the shape of the flames, almost hidden in them.
The four distinct flame pieces that make one flame should be able to be separated out to be used to represent their area of focus on a sitemap on the website we are creating. When combined together, they make the Fire logo flame.
I really like the way you've incorporated the use of white space in between the flames to form a shape. I'd love to see a version where two more color segments fo the flame are added and the white spaces each represent one are of focus (Sports, Fitness, Adventure, and Trainings). Or perhaps some are represented with white space and others with watermarks. I leave that to your creativity. You are on the right track and I am excited to see the next iteration.
Please make the word sports the same size and color as recreation and put them both below Fire on the same line.
Could you make sports on the same line and don’t size as recreation? Also, I’d like to have four distinct colors in the flames. I really like to two you have. Additional two possibly in the orange and turquoise range. Not primary colors.
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There are elements of each one that we really like. There are also elements that are missing from each one. Please take a look and see if you can come up with a variation of your logo that has the following characteristics:
Communicate the four areas of focus (Sports, Fitness, Adventure, and Trainings) with icons subtly incorporated into the shape of the flames, almost hidden in them.
The four distinct flame pieces that make one flame should be able to be separated out to be used to represent their area of focus on a sitemap on the website we are creating. When combined together, they make the Fire logo flame.
I really like the way you've incorporated the use of white space in between the flames to form a shape. I'd love to see a version where two more color segments fo the flame are added and the white spaces each represent one are of focus (Sports, Fitness, Adventure, and Trainings). Or perhaps some are represented with white space and others with watermarks. I leave that to your creativity. You are on the right track and I am excited to see the next iteration.
Please make the word sports the same size and color as recreation and put them both below Fire on the same line.
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but can you sent my work to top 5 rank, so i can upload mu new works . . .
thanks
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