Fay-Woof-Ville Dog ParkLogo Design Contest

Fortext,

Thank you for your entry.

Your Entry #12 is a very high candidate for contest winner.

Here are some changes I will need:

Instead of the brown that is being used throughout the image, use black instead.
Change the dog collar to Brown or some other color.

Move the words " Dog Park" a bit lower (use reasonable spacing) and center those words to the image.
Make them a bit bigger because I want the public to clearly see that the sign is telling that this is a dog park (use reasonable font size).

Try placing one dog print to the right and one to the left of the words "Dog Park" (use reasonable placement, size and spacing)....I think that might bring an extra pop to your image.

Including all the changes I have mentioned above maybe you can try a version with the words "Fay-Woof-Ville" with a slight downwards arch.

Can't wait to see your re-submit.

Good luck....

Marvin Thomas

Fortext,

Just a few more pointer.

Regarding the space right above the dog head, is that supposed to be sun rays?

Remove that affect and simply leave it as blue sky.

Also, if you can increase the size of the entire environment around dogs head I think that would a better visual flow for the image.

The space around the dogs head seem to a bit tight at the moment.

Hi Thomas,

Thank you so much for your positive feedback. I've submitted two revised entries as you requested. I removed the sky effect adjust some size and the text arch.

Please let me know if you might need any other revise. I am at your service. In the meantime, I will try to play more with the text and will submit more variations as soon as possible. Thank you again.

Kind regards,

Sean

Sean,

Thank you for the rapid response.

Kind regards,

Marvin Thomas