#57, I like the detail work behind everything. Can you get rid of the main box and black border, keep the ornate gray piece, use the typeface that's in #58, stick with one color on the typeface (dark brown or black). I REALLY like the hand drawn typeface in #57, #49, #52 for the word Fat. Can you do angel in the same typeface? The cherub is nice. You've gotten the closest with what we're looking for without using clip art. However if it had a more hand sketched look to eat with some shadowing and better detail that would be awesome. I'd also like to see the guitar out of his hands and insert a wine bottle or an understated action that says, "Hey, I'm not perfect, I like to drink and eat, so either join me or piss off!" Our final design will have the cherub/angel removed and used as a branding piece on napkins, -t-shirts, menus, matchbooks, etc. So the it needs to be strong enough--and unique enough!--to stand on its own without using Fat Angel. The border in #59 is nice, there's something off about the bottom, it kind of looks like a root with a bow attached. I wouldn't object to seeing what you can do with reworking this border, maybe a little less ornate on the top corners (don't need the black leaves either). Nice work!