#13 - As you can tell I really like your concept. I'm not too sure however on the font used. I would like you to experiment with a few different fonts if you don't mind. I would like to see a font that is shorter and wider in the lettering, maybe a font that is a little thicker as well. If you could provide some alternative designs using the concept it would be great.
Could i also see how it looks in lower case. Modern logo's seem to all be in lower case so it would be great to see whether this could work.
#80 and #208 - I think the exclamation mark or 'i' look too bold/thick and make the logo look too casual. clean, modern and classy are the looks I'm going for.
#251 - this logo looks great. The biggest issue i have however is that to the naked eye the 'i' looks like it is splitting the words fashion in fash and on. Whilst it is one of my favourites for a business logo i don't like this element of it.