Entry#1--As far as the graphic goes, we'd like to see designs either with a more stylized eye, or without an eye graphic altogether (or with an eye incorporated into the design in a creative way.) Some people don't like a more "clinical" looking eye, like this one, staring at them.
The font is nice, although we'd also like to see some designs that are less formal, and more family-friendly. Also, we think this design would look better with a space between "Family" and "Vision". Thanks.