Families In TrainingLogo Design Contest

I really like #8 except It is too difficult to read the tag line. Is there a way to brighten up the orange and make the tag line more pronounced?

Hi James,

Thanks for your feedback, but the contest was close. I can't do any revisions anymore, in fact there is no rank. Remember now you're in Judging Mode, and only the 1st rank can make submission.
So, i'll get in touch and look forward to your response and feedback.

Regards,
f!ng

Looks pretty good except the symbol needs to be only southern california-orange county and san diego

plus the tag line must be more pronounced some how

Revisions can be seen here #41 & #42
If it not fixed yet or may need any other change, feel free to let me know..

Looking good. Is that the only color orange? How about a bright yellow? Something that is bold!

Other than that I like it!

Also the tag line must also be more prominent somehow. More brighter color?

How about this.. #43, #45, #46

Are you're ok in using some gradient?
If you're not, this version (#47) is no gradient

something has to make the tag line look stronger-box around it? something. also it needs to include both orange and san diego counties. doing great-almost there!

Hi, you can check the new versions here #48, #49, #50, #51

Alright, the color of yellow and orange is just not working at all. I need something brighter. Forget the coloring of the southern california symbol. Plus the symbol is only of orange county and needs to include san diego.

Is there a way to get some color intertwined with the FIT symbol or some of the letters. Something to make the business name and tag line different. thanks for a ll your work. It has to get better though!!

Ok, here we go #52, #54, #55

its not working. lets just get the symbol out of the number one ranked logo and use orange for the tag line and let me see what that looks like please!

thanks!

Ok, this is it #56
Im just little confused about what you exactly needed..

Hi James, how are you?
I don't hear any feedback from you for a couple days. If you have any suggestions or may you need any other change in your logo, feel free to let me know..