Hi, thanks for your submission. #33 has an interesting symmetry with a good color scheme and a decent (although rather plain and not sufficiently contemporary) font. The birds, however, look much too fearsome and jagged -- we want a more welcoming (yet still very professional-feeling) look to our logo.
Also, the logo on top of the text, as you currently have it, would look good in print and on apparel & merchandise, but for the website we would like to see an option where the graphical logo is on the same line as the text. In other words, less height and more width. Look at the attached screenshot of our home page to see where the logo needs to fit (top left, on the same level as the navigation bar).
We're looking forward to seeing these changes and any other ideas you might have. Thanks!
#160 has a very modern, unbounded, cleanly designed look. The curves, the colors, the 3D appearance are all great. We tested it on our web page and it blends quite well with the rest of our layout.
However, the graphic image is very aggressive, and we've had a split opinion about this aspect: It certainly appeals to young people, but older generations may not take to it as positively, and the majority of our client base is executives and professionals who are, on average, middle-aged.
We're interested in pursuing this design further, but we're wondering if you can change the image so it doesn't appear quite so frightening -- right now, it looks like a screaming bird that's about to catch its prey. Can you offer some variations that would appeal to a wider public? Thank you!