#11 LOVE the inner and outer circles but I wish they were closed, without the gaps on the sides. Also, we make comedies and this looks like a mean face. Can you make him seem less serious?
Can you move the face lower so that there isn't all that extra room where his neck would be?
#27 Can you make the mouth into kind of a Han Solo type smirk? As we look at the face, have the left side of the lip raised maybe? Maybe a little bit of an open mouth?
#30 Can you make the lines in his face thinner? Definitely the line under the bottom lip. Right now it's so thick it almost looks like facial hair. Also please make the mustache bigger and just a little bit more crooked. Thanks.
#59 You definitely did the best blue circle of all the artists. However, this guy just kind looks like Old Jewish Films. The drawing itself is great but just not what we're looking for. #65 is another great drawing but there's very little focus on the mustache.