Expedition SelfLogo Design Contest

Interesting - like the darker color on the word expedition - would like to see deeper, richer colors for the person #26 would be my fav right now - thank you so much for participating in my contest -

I'm liming 28 - but the word self seems weak - somehow - like the font or placement isn't strong enough - hmmm - like the depth - more color - the better - I liked the color usage in the möbius strip - just additional thoughtsc:) - thank you for your time and creativity

Thanks for thee feedback. I will work on other font / color options to see if it helps out

Okay - some ideas - the word self in a script font in green - or the word self in the expedition font and color and expedition in current self font and color - reversed - it's nice - please don't feel like you have to make all of these changes - I have a decent sense of the concept you"re working with :) thank you

just saw your comments. these last version do not reflect your suggestions. I will upload new ones. Funny we both were thinking script fonts but on the different words! ;)

Love 34 and 32 - has a mire artistic flair - like it very much - more human - self expressive - thank you thank you! :)

Hi, well - I've decided to work with you as one of the 5 - I realize that we kind of left the design in the state that you created it - I just loved the font so much in this -

The issue at this point, is that the visual doesn't really give anyone insight as to the Expedition part of it... the idea of a journey, or the idea that there are 2 ways that someone becomes open to self development - the degree to which they are concluded or unconcluded and the degree to which they focus outward towards the world or inward towards Self.

I am not sure that the person is enough by itself - so that's my initial place to dialogue with you from - let me know if I've asked to much of you or am not understanding your perspective on something... thanks... Sam

oh the green that you're using is a bit "pine foresty" - I tend to like warmer greens - :)

Hi Jane, here is a new version to better illustrate movement/journey....let me know your thoughts?

That's beautiful - very different - I'm not re-ranking until tomorrow - makes it easier for me to see the iterations - my only concern is that the e may not be clear enough to recognize the word expedition Thanks for taking another run at it Sam

Gosh that orange is pretty - liking this very much - really appeals to my "beauty loving" self :)

Much better - can def see the e now

I have to say - this logo is so beautiful - I am torn because of the market that I'm trying to reach but I want to make sure you know that if I don't choose it - it's not because it's not great! it'll be because I have to think not just of my own "preferences" but of the market that will be deciding to use the site...

I have 2 minor changes and then I think we can call it done...is there any way to give the p just a bit more definition either by the shade or color or something and secondly - the Self font is still a bit "dry" - kind of reminds me of those charts they use when I go to get my eyes checked... anything else that's complimentary but not so plain?

Thank you very much for all of your work, all of your creativity and sharing so much of it in service to my contest.... :) Sam

Hi - it's been awhile - don't know if you've seen your Sam's Blog up and running but it's at Expeditionself.com/blog - :D I love it - it's everywhere....

Also, we are running another contest - xandermediagroup - thought you might like to participate - let me know.. :D Sam

Hi Sam, thanks for letting me know! I'll check it out!
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