Entries #85, 86, and 87 are really interesting. The use of the purples with the greys are very attractive and sophisticated. I would love to see the logo design relate to a "certificate" as we are a training company. Also if you could place an emphasis on the word etiquette instead of making "Moms" the prominent word that would be terrific as we are a training company not a mom's group that teaches etiquette. I love your work! thank you so much
Entry #104 is getting there. I love the idea of butterfly and the certificate/wreath. Is it possible to streamline this design so that it is more simple? The gray/magenta/purple is elegant and sophisticated. I really like the society for certified etiquette trainers font juxtaposed with the EMs font. There is a lot going on right now but I feel like this could really work well-please keep in mind that we have male and female customers so consider what a well dressed man might find on a silk necktie or a professional businesswoman might find classy. Thanks! I think that we are so close.
I would like to see different, simpler versions of this design #104 Use gray, magenta, purple Simplify the butterfly/wreath Perhaps incorporate the logo into the name Etiquette Moms It should look very professional not cute Not too feminine-we have men as customers Our clients are business owners/we are like a business school that trains-trainers to go into businesses to teach Our customers want to appear as though they have status and prestige Thanks!
I like the way that #116, 117, 118 are beginning to become simpler and more refined. It looks like the butterfly wing on the left is an E and on the right is an M (turned on its side) that might be interesting to consider-using the wings of the butterfly as an EM? Perhaps removing the red M in the middle of the butterfly would simplify the image even more? Could the antenna of the butterfly curve around the butterfly to become the wreath and then wrap around the letters somehow Etiquette Moms? Perhaps that would further incorporate the logo and name and simplify the entire design? I prefer The Society of Certified Etiquette Trainers in #104 in gray-that looks lovely. I like the way the image has the light burst from behind-Do you envision this design as being a gray rectangle or do you see it as being able to be printed on white as well? Thanks so much for your hard work! It is clear that you are hearing my comments and using your talent to capture the vision we have for our company. :)