Submission #2 is still our favorite. We are trying to emphasize etiquette over moms. Also, please see our site at etiquettemoms.com. We are selling certification programs for trainers, not etiquette training classes to mothers and children. We put people in business. Can you emphasize that and the word etiquette over the word mom, and not just women? Also, please add Society of Certified Etiquette Trainers per the public comment. Thanks! Your work is beautiful.