I would like a combination of what you and Lanid have created - I have uploaded a draft idea that I would like you both to iterate on. I would like to see a version with a round bag in a similar style or something similiar taking inspiration from your #82 design,
Hi Nong - I recogise that you have been the most engaged in the competition and appreciate your effort - although I am still not completely happy with any of the final designs. I like the price tag entry that you have just submitted - although I would prefer the "e" to look like the one in #183. Are you able to provide 2 further options;
1) Update #225 with a letter "e" similar to #183 2) Update #202 with a letter "e" similar to #183
OK - I've moved you back to top spot. The other designer has added some alternative options - I would like to give you an opportunity to respond.
It may be a little late in the contest - but a colleague has forwarded me an interesting idea and example. Please have a look at the ADMA logo in the link below. The idea that smaller shapes form the circle pattern is interesting and it would be good to see how scattered pieces/shapes could possibly be incorporated into the tag or bag design..
I really prefer the "e" from the #183 - but like the tag symbol - so am in a little bit of a dilemma. Are you able to use the scattered pieces effect to do something with the "360" text - it does not have to be hundreds of scattered pieces it maybe just a few. These is another attempt to symbolise the configurable nature of the store and also enable these "shapes" to be infused into the vendor brand subtly.
Hi Nong - thanks for continuing to work on this. I still don't think we are there yet. Please can you try;
1) Change the "360" or maybe just the "0" in the "360"text into dynamic small scattered shapes 2) Try a different "e" in the tag - I have uploaded another example idea that might work. The shapes uses to create the "e" in the Tag should also be similar to those used in the scattered shapes - just larger versions perhaps.
I like the shapes effect on the tag can you try a few options..
1) Reducing the size of e and leaving the scattered squares in the top right of the tag 2) Using the scattered squares sparkle on the side of the 0 in 360 rather than corner 3) Using the scattered squares in the slogan Every Business has a Story...." instead of "..." (dots)
Thanks for submitting the updates. I'm still not quite there. Can we try..
1) Use the e and label from #225 - but the smaller scattered squares from #248 - but the scattered squares run along the top right of the label (so separate them from the "e") 2) Use the lettering from #252 (removing the scattered squares from the 360) 3) Use very small squares as the dots getting increasing larger in size from very tiny dot to a square the size of the scattered squares used in the label - should only be 4 or 5 dots/squares.
#253 is really close! I really like the square dots in the logo :-)
1) Can you just add a few extra scattered squares of differing sizes to the scattered squares in the top right of the label so that they runs along the length of that short side of the label.