Regarding #23, I wanted "Esquire," "Property" and "Management" on three different lines....maybe esquire and management to be in red while property is in script and in white? This artwork is exclusively for a t-shirt layout so I wanted it to be bold.
#23, Ok, the logo is growing on me...I like the outline around esquire for the t-shirt. Perhaps we can soften the corners of the outline to make it look more like a stamp-like logo. Also, I was thinking, maybe we put "property management" inside the outline as well...then on the bottom we might be able to open the red border and sneak in a .com as a break in the border?
Re: #74...I like the idea of adding the ".com" in the design so that I don't have to add the whole website again in the t-shirt. I think the font is too small on the .com...maybe we can put more spacing in between the red frame and maybe thicken the line so that the .com can be a bit bigger? Also, can we shift the .com over toward the right a bit...check out this link: http://www.suspect-packages.com/clothing/suspect_packages/index.php
#79...could I get more space between the "." and the "com" I think it looks a bit too jammed together. Also, could I get your opinion between the rounded border look compared to the squared off look?
here you have the revision spacing the "." and com. I like rounder border why? because it is visually appealing, simple seem 'easier on the eye' compared to the square off look.