Dear Crafty 86 - thank you so much for all of your entries! Entry #42 has some interest -if we could make the motif where the red dots are hanging crystals and perhps a few beaded crystal swags I think you may have something. . . . think "chandelier" also, the font for embelishments something more like #43 is fine. Is there a way to "marry" two letters in embellishments to make is more stylized or relevant? thank you
Dear Crafty 86 - Wow! #57 is really getting there! Let's make all the letters in embellishments the same color. And I believe we can remove the line under embellishments - and then a more calligraphied font for dazzling invitations. . .
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If you would like to create just one more option utilizing the swags on the bottom of "embellishments" - kind of like "embellishments" is garnished with the hanging swags and crystals. . you can completely remove "dazzling invitations" for this option. If you think that doesn't look so great. . .maybe as another option to use one of the "e"'s in the chandelier (with the swags and crystals) for "embellishments"!
#66 . . . love it! What can we do do mesh the swag on the letters? that way it is connected a little more seamlessly?
Also, would like to see a more loopy, elegant, sassy font for "dazzling invitations"!
I am torn between #68 & 69 . . .let's do #68 . . what if the center crystal dots the "i" somehow? Or what if all the crystals were grey with the exception of the center crystal which is pink/purple? even if the center crystal hangs down and dots the i of "invitations" could be cute . . . embellishments would have to be lifted up some
also, would love to see a different more elegant font for "dazzling invitations" maybe pf champion script pro??
What do you think about using a softer pink or a fushia pink instead of the plum?
Hi Again! Have posted # 71 , need to work further towards the suggestions............ I'm aware that the contest ends in the next 4 hrs , it's 12:45 am in my country ...and my grey cells are giving up ........:-( I could continue the work tomorrow also in judging mode ,i.e if you keep me at the first position ...
Hoping to continue tomorrow on the same .... Goodnight Amrita
#68 - I think the second crystals in on both sides should be hanging off of that little loop that is flared out - it looks a little awkward or remove them completely and let the teardrops hang from the beaded swag ;) Also, really need to find a great font for "dazzling invitations"
Posted the entries- 89 thru 94 for the following: 1) the second craystals -not sure if i have got it right 2) the grey grystals along with the singled colored crystal .The 'i' can't be centered,so it looks rather odd if i color the dot of 'i'. Let e know if you are happy with the tone of the colored crystal. 3)fonts
#90 - thank you so much for all of your entries! On both sides of the center drop there is a loop that is coming off the "e" by the hanging crystal. . i think it should either a)be removed, or b)have the crystal hanging from it. It looks a little funny just sticking out. . .do you see what I mean. Still looking for the right font for "dazzling invitations"
#99 - I like this one. . the entry is so small that i cannot see the detail on the upper chain. . . also, still see the chain sticking outside of the letters.. . was hoping that we can get that a little more meshed in so it flows instead of being visible (outside of the lines??) not sure how to describe. Also, still looking for right font for "dazzling invitations!
Posted 110 through 113 with the more visible beaded swag and the swags meshing with the letters to possible extent. The text 'embellishment' has to be close in color to the swags ,so i updated that bit.Have posted 4 font variations..including PF Champion Script pro.
114 & 115 are with and without the 'curl' in Champion script pro...........can update with any other font if you like.
thank you for all of your entries. . . I think for the first ranking entry - the top swag should either be a smaller or a little different. . . I think the last one you used was nice, just needed to be a little more defined. I like that those crazy loops are gone on the second place entry. . . still looking for the right "dazzling invitations" font for both . .
#115 what do you think about taking the chandelier and incorporating it into one of the letters like the "t" or top of the "b" it would have to shrink down a bit though. . .
have updated the ebaded swag and some more font options........may be you could suggest some fonts ..
For 115 ,the chandelier is primarily an impression created by the two 'e's ...trying to incorporate that into 't' or 'b' would be messing witha perfectly nice logo in my opinion...........
I think #112 is the winner. . would like to see the top swag a little less bumpy. . .and dazzling invitation more like #115 - I think there should be a variation on the g" with a fancier swash.
hi amrita - thank you. . were you able to soften the upper beaded swag to something a little different than the bottom? It looks the same. the connections of the beads to the letters are really hard to see, but they look like they are on top of the letters vs blended (i mentioned this earlier in the tournament) but I suppose I can easily change them and the font for dazzling later on this end.