ufotofu - i like the fact that you have made a character which is the direction i am looking at - i feel the logo itself does not pop - it gets lost on the purple and it is slanted to much - there is no need for the purple stamp - remember eGirl has gadgets on her body/suit and is born from bits and bytes - she is a techno baby
i prefer your first character even though the second one is pretty cool - i like the hip style she has but remember - eGirl is a superhero - catwoman like but with gadgets on her suit- the first typeface is also more solid - graphically pleasing - just to heavy - weighty - oh she does not wear a jacket she is like Elastagirl from the incedibles