this was inspired by your slogan: engage, enpower, evolve...also it symbolizes the oranda's fin in an abstract form. please provide feedback, thank you.
Vidi - Nice job - Love the colors and the movement. I wanted to draw more attention to the symbol, than the name. Is there a way you can manipulate that? Is there a way to make the fin form the outline of the fish? In #16 it curves around a bit with the extra grey. I'm wondering if that can be played with! Use your imagination. Really like this!
#17 - you are so very talented. I'd like to see it with the symbol at the left and right of Oranda for #17 and for #16 to the left or right or the words. I really like the fin, it shows in my mind, moving forward. Artistically, is there a way to focus on the symbol over the words? This is sooo exciting. Thank you so much for your submissions. I look forward to seeing more!
NICE JOB! You are so responsive! I love it! I write it and I see it in moments! I would like to see this with maybe a dot between the Teaching Learning Certification and also with the symbol to the left of the words instead of the top. If it works to flip the symbol, try it! THANK YOU!
Thank you! Exactly what I asked for. If this was on a business card, could one read the Teaching Learning and Cerfication. Could we push up the symbol and increase the font of Teaching Learning and Coaching? Or is there another way to increase the font that would work artistically? Thank you!
i think it is legible on business cards and here are other options #51 larger font #52 original font size (This comment references Entry #49 w larger font)
Really like #50 and #51 with the line too. Is the Teaching Learning and Certification the same font size and style as your former post with 'Certified'? If no, I'm curious want that would look like too. I'm having fun! Hope you are too!
This is my second attempt to write this - so much for WIFI!
Another thought, I am really liking the outside swish the same color as Oranda and am wondering if you can switch some colors around, as Oranda is very close to the word Orange and I'm not sure having "oranda" orange is a great thing. Thoughts?
Wow - again thanks for being so responsive. What is your opinion on Oranda being Orange?? Shall we try green? I'm off to sleep. Hope to see more of you in the a.m.! THANKS so much! Really appreciate your excitement and entries!
I like all the colors, but i'm partial to the purple #62...it's striking and clear. ..The other ones are no less :) I will be here tomorrow and every day 'till the big lady sings. I'm glad you know now what it's like to be excited about a design...how much fun it can be.
I'd like to see 62 and 65 with a less bold, more subtle print of Oranda so that the eye is drawn to the symbol over the words. I think this worked when the word is in grey.
Hope you're in your creative mode and dreaming up some good stuff. Some friends of mine who have peaked at the contest really like your work, esp. #48! Kudos to you!
not only will this look fantastic on your business cards and letterheads...but also your website... take a few steps back and look at this from afar...very recognizeable.
#135 and #138 are still my favs. #138 looks brighter because it doesn't have the fade. I'm trying to remember terms from an elements of design class I took 100 years ago. Radiant, no, Richer, no, Warm hue, maybe?
In my mind I'm still chicken and egging it and trying to imagine the 'emblem' a teacher or school would want next to their business name that says, "Oranda Certified." What would the words "certified" look like just under "Oranda"? Possible flush like in #16?
Please share other ideas! I REALLY appreciate ALL your communication! You are multi-talented!
#165 and #162 - Great to see all of the variety you are producing! You are talented indeed! How about playing with the different color combinations in #165 for both the circle and the "fish waves". Is it possible to be trustworthy, secure and playful, warm and smart? Go for it! THANKS so much!
Hey Vidi - I like #165 with the 'fish waves' inside. Can you play with the colorful "fish waves" and different colors for the words "Oranda Certified". It works for me to have the words inside the sphere. THANKS!
Good morning California time! Feedback time, as well. I'll try to explain what I have in my mind's eye:
Circular logo like in #171 Fish swishes like in #171 Less grey in center so almost white Boarder to the right is is subtly grey Smaller word Oranda "Certified" fits flush underneath
Thanks for being so responsive and for your GREAT communication!
you can recreate this into a stamp (the image is the O for oranda with symbol)...so when you certify teachers they get their document stamped and certified. just an idea. #211 #212 #214
Vidi - I have extended my contest and today, just wasn't a great day for me to be involved in a 'final' day. You're so talented! I'd love to see what else you might have in you. Your last entries are my favorite of yours! THANKS!
Again - nice showing! Some other great plays! You seem to really understand my messaging with wording style and placement. I have future projects in mind for you! :)