After all your handwork in changing it, I think I really like the first one you produced!!
#8 Great job!
Two things:
1)Can I see it in different colors to get an idea of something else. You choose colors.
2) On the original design (
#8), Can you keep the logo the same, but try changing the font, maybe like the one I ranked #4 (with a line in front of it?)
Thank you!