Congrats for making our short list of finalist. We are particularly interested in 282 but would like some variations.
We mainly like that it captures integration, not sure if it should be "interlocking" on outside borders, maybe different colors and a "brighter" center. Could you play around with it a little more? Perhaps soften the "blades" so they are not angles at the ends...
#334, could you move the design to the left and provide some variations on font? Also, perhaps play around with a more asymmetric design that does not have the circles closed at the top.
ON #354, could you raise the 4 up slightly without decreasing the size. Also, could you turn the design a little more to the right so that the top left circles are not quite as small?
Ok nong, we are getting close! We like the direction of the 366 design. So, let's work with that one with the following revisions:
- could you make the tage line of 366 more reflective of 381 (not capitalized and all under "Health" - could you give us a few variations of color with the tagline with this designe (grey, light blue, maybe the orange that is in the design) - Put just a little more space in between E4 and Health