I think this is heading in the right direction. Maybe some more focus on the autonomous robot theme, with biomass being secondary. No company name text needed
No text. No reflections. Less pincher-like imagery. It's supposed to be a kid-safe product so sharp corners are less desirable. Soft red/yellow flame/fire imagery is important to distinguish from electric models though..
I like the new versions. Regarding the colors, could you try a red -> yellow -> white fade instead of only red or yellow? (like a temperature gradient going to white-hot)
Also, could you try something that looks like a top-view wheel abstraction at the top & bottom center?
Thanks for your feedback, I am submit new entries adding heat color (white-yellow-orange-red) and wheel from top view. If anything to be modified or other direction don't hesitate to tell me.
I like the new images. I'm thinking a more abstract depiction of the wheels, and I only need two. I modified one of your images to show my intent here: https://www.dropbox.com/s/zt3vodu73b78xay/theday_fb1.png (only one shown) My mod is only to show placement and general intent, you should certainly try other approaches.
I like the dot in the middle. I would be interested to see if it looks better as a box with rounded edges or as a larger circle.
I'm liking the scalloped edges in 99&93. I'm thinking boost the contrast there enough that it will translate well to a line drawing. Maybe a transition from the gray you are using around the square -> green instead of green->yellow? not sure yet. I don't think the black black tire bumps are even needed.
I would like to also see if the square might look better as a rectangle, same height, double width extended to the left? I like the large circle though.
Wow! Thanks so much for all the rank! Let me know what else I can do for you in order to complete the contest (in case you want to end the contest earlier). No worries, I'm ready to give all my best for you to do any revisions as much as you need until its perfect!
I would like a rectangle, not a square. Try the same width as the square you currently are using, but the height of the original square. I'm guessing that would be approximately two units wide and one unit high.
I want to keep the scalloped transitions as in #107, I just want a high-contrast gray-green transition instead of a low-contrast green-yellow transition.
I think what I said about the gray around the rectangle confused you. I liked that gray, and wanted you to also use the same gray for the color in the scalloped transitions.
Can you blend the 3D texture from the rectangle with the green stem that attaches to it?
For the section on the right, is there a way to make it look leafy in an abstract way? I'm not sure I want it yet, but would like to see what it would look like
Sorry for miss understanding about rectangle and square, here the update. try make scalloped transitions color and rectangle revision and blend it (#122 and #123).
I'm liking 118 and 120. On the scalloped transitions, could you try a lighter gray? Possibly the same gray base color used around the rectangle box?
I like the leafy section look. I'm wondering if it would look better with more organic shapes/tones. Maybe try dropping the red/yellow colors in that section only, and go with shades of green? I'm not sure what I want yet
From #134,135, could you try: 1) Change tire fade from dark/light gray to: background green->light gray 2) On the leaf arrangement: less bulky leaves that follow the existing outside contour. I like the light green color accent. 3) Between the leaves, could you put a split in the stalk? Not completely separate stalks, just a parting in the middle somewhere
I'm planning on ending the contest early, but I couldn't find a clear explanation of how that works in the documentation so I sent an email to support. I want to skip to the judging phase to finalize the design, but not go directly to wrap-up because there are clearly some details still to work through
Did the leaves change? I was hoping they would be about half as wide.
#147 is the closest to what I was looking for. I would like to see it without the border box, and with the shading running the entire length of that middle section
Thanks. Could you reduce the leaf width further, by 1/3 of the current width and have the green->red shading start at the green color used for the rest of the E?
From #158, could you have the start of the green->red shading match the other green used in the rest of the design?
There is still a light green bounding box around the green->>>white shading, can that be removed? I'm not sure if I want it yet, so I would like to see both with and without
Regarding reduction of leaf width: I would like the width of the leaf reduced by 1/3, but the tip-to-tip distance of the leaf design to remain the same as in #158
I'm happy with the leaves and green->>>white shading in #161, thanks.
There's something not quite right with the scallped shading in the tire area. It looks like it goes from green to dark gray to light gray. I would like to see if it might look better as a fade from green to light gray, or green to white