Here's one concept (#173, #174) that is not too ordinary, without meaning, but with subtle dynamism, incorporated through treatment of letters "E", and following tagline, with same element!
Hope you'll like it,...feel free to suggest improvements! Thank you!
Glad to hear that,...they are more elegant and pro-looking! Here's one more variation (#183) with two subtle/clean leaves, incorporated, suggesting movement/fitness! Let me know! Thanks!
I see your client likes my initial idea more, but let me suggest another version with symbolic fitness/movement element (#185). It has more unique feel to it, with those accents!
I'm sorry, I had to withdraw that entry! Apperantly using same design layout as other designer before can be considered using other designer's concept! We're trying to keep things fair, so I had to withdraw it! There are still other concepts left,...specialy those on red background! Let ma know, and sorry for the inconvenience once again!
...few more options on #212, #213, and probably better version of #174, on updated #215,...more readable "PERFORMANCE GROUP" part. Thoughts/suggestions!? Thanks!
After your latest brief update, I've tried to maintain original elements of my initial design, with few ways to incorporate stars in it. #254, #256, #262 and #271 might be interesting,...stars are there, but very subtle, and versions with 5 stars give it that exclusive feel! Any thoughts/suggestions!? Thanks!
Trying another, more elegant font on #321, #322, #323, #324 and #325. Looks more compact, but that strong initial font has better visual impact and contributes to recognizability and instant memorability! Any thoughts/suggestions!? Thanks!
Hi again! Here are few more ideas with different style approaches, and more feminine fonts - #345, #346, #347, #348 and my original design on #349, with more dynamic, but elegant custom made font!
Thank you for the feedback so far, and if your client likes some of these designs, but maybe needs some tweeks to be done, let me know!
After spending some time on your contest, trying to get into your client's head, I also think designs #351 and #345 are the best of all my entries (#183 was also one of my personal favorites, but it might be a bit too "strong", having in mind your client's wishes).
Both of these designs are very elegant,...#351 is all feminine, and although it is script, this is custom modified and unique as it can be,...on #352 you have one more slight color mod on the star element.
#345 is a bit stronger design, w/ feminine style and masculine posture mixed into compact layout,...it's a very nice balance between the two principles,...as a man, I would probably prefer this option, but I think you'll not make mistake if you go with #351.
Hope this little analysis will be helpful! Thank you for cooperation on developing these designs (I'm very satisfied how they turned out in the end), and if you see any place for improvement, let me know! Thank you!
351 and 352 seems to be her favorite right now - we can discuss the color of the star if you win.
she really like 345 though, too, but wonders what a version would look like if you made the dot in the I and star instead, and perhaps removed the stars at the bottom, or a combination of both.
Can you play a little more? your designs are definitely her tops so far, so we should be able to settle soon.
...#353, offers one more color combo, and on entry #354 requested modification w/ the star as dot on "i",...maybe previous version looks better!? Thoughts!? Thanks!
..another version w/ star on the "i" on #355! I've just remembered, I've tried this once before, but it too much resembled to some communist monument, or revolutionary movement,...I wouldn't go that way! #345 looks better, having in mind your client's needs!
Client is now liking #2 ranked design, but would like the bottom text to only have one star (like the #3 ranked design) and the same bottom treatment of #3
There's updated design on #362, with star element incorporated, but putting word PERFORMANCE on top of the word GROUP, might be considered copying that other designer's layout,...he'll report me again and I don't want that.
Hope you'r client will like this option,...it is better proportionally balanced than putting words in tagline on top of each other! Let me know!
...sorry, didn't write the rules,...and honestly still adjusting to some of them! :)
...let me be a bit clearer,...we can do modifications on design after, if client needs some tweaks done,...only not in that specific direction! I did endless modifications and variations on this contest,...moving tagline inch left of right, shouldn't be a problem! :)
got it. Thanks for working with me on the rules and understanding. I like to concept of Logo Tournament, but sometimes the client won't move as quickly as the strict parameters of the service.
It is no big deal,...I'm long time in this business, to understand the importance of branding,...and to know, there are different kinds of people, with various requests and personalities. Take your time,...I'm here if you need anything else!
Thank you for choosing this design! Your client chose well, and I'm personaly very pleased how it turned out in the end,...nice addition to my portfolio! I've just uploaded final logo source files,...and if I can provide any other service, feel free to contact me through here, or directly through contact page on my portfolio website (www.bigbaldbeardos.com).