Thank you for the entry! I like what you did with the sumbol, but I don't think the font/wordmark has enough character to what I want. I posted another comment on the main page, so if you can have a look at that and maybe give it another stab??? You will noticed I've uploaded another collage regarding some patterns and also provided a link to some logos that I liked in terms of simplicity/character.
I like the simplicity and layouts of most of your logos, but don't think they've quite captured the feel. I like how you differentiated the wordmark "dubson" with "creative in #21 and also how it has its own character in the "dubson" wordmark, but i don't think it suits what I want. Is there a way you can make it a bit more techno/funky/retro like? with try adding some shapes such as arrows, arrowheads, triangle, or diamonds. If you have a look at the dubson_moodboard and logo_collage, you will notice certain wordmarks such as the "analog", "robotic records", "lakai", "native", and "tron"... are all examples I like, but if those can be tailored to my needs some how that would be great. Also can you try with a few background colors. For logos such as #26, #15, and #16, I really like the simplicty, but the "dubson" can use more character and could be differentiated more from "creative" like how you have #21. Plus thats a very interesting symbol in #26, personally I think its cool and creative, but not sure if my target audience will be able to make it out. Again referring to the moodboard and logo_collage, I was thinking of simple symbols such as "special blend", "lakai", "gecko", "ephin" etc. but again with some type of the shapes(arrows, arrowheads, triangles etc.) while matching the sort of techno/funky/retro feel, if that makes sense??? Let me know if you have any more questions.
Appreciate the hard work! I'm thinking #60 is my favorite from your selection so far. Did you get a chance to read more last 2 comments I posted on the main page? I pointed out a few more fonts/look for the wordmark and also some more symbols for logos that might help your inspiration. I really like some of the solid bright colors on the 3rd collage as well, if you wanted to try some of those on solid backgrounds. Thank you.