Dreamweaver ArtistsLogo Design Contest

I like the artistic form and adding an icon. The lines breaking up the font and icon don't work for us because as it gets smaller it gets harder to read, and will be difficult to embroider.

Thank you for your feedback, I look forward in further dialogs with you to best bring to life the creative concepts that would help your company ideas.

WE Like entry #9 the best of the ones you've submitted. We aren't very fond of the particular "dreamweaver" font. Block fonts are fine. The font in 7 is better. #8 the icon is faded - like the stronger colors better in #9

I'm sending an revised concept please let me know what further changes you would like made to the mock-up

To get this to what my wife liked, use the original "wings" from the first logo you submitted.

The wife REALLY doesn't like what I've made you do. Back to the original. Sigh. It has grown on me.