Looks very striking! I wonder about a more modern font, and a slightly more masculine/geometric shape for the leaves? Also, try the word "Better" in italics for emphasis
The leaf seems a bit overpowering, and the swoosh is a bit overdone. I think I still prefer #114, except maybe tone down the leaf somewhat yet still keep it masculine
Here's an idea: skip the symbol entirely, and just use letters. In block capitals, "PAGDIN HEALTH" with the size of the font for Health a bit smaller than the font for Pagdin. Underneath, the tag line Living Longer Better, with the word "Better" in italics. Below that, in small font, "Dr. G Pagdin Inc." I really like the white letters on black background, but would also like to see a red background
I could not view #147, but when you upload the files for me could you please include it? Thank you very much for your excellent design! Your portfolio is quite impressive. I had a lot of fun trying to choose between many excellent concepts.
Grant Pagdin MD gpagdin@shaw.ca www.drgrantpagdin.com Kelowna, BC Canada