DooplaLogo Design Contest

I like this but I'm wondering if the colors are too dark?
Maybe a little more vibrant. I also feel like because our name is so different I need to make sure people know this is a salon. Can the Paul Mitchell Focus Salon be a little more visible?

Hi Dooplasalon,
Thank you for your feedback, i am currently away from my design computer, i will update by tonight Jakarta time ( about 7-8 hours)

update: #56 #57 #58 #59

#85, we love that you put the Paul Mitchell on top. Can we put the "A Paul Mitchell" above the word "Doopla", and put "Focus Salon" underneath the word "Doopla". Where we leave the words "A Paul Mitchell" and "Focus" smaller and the words "Salon" and "Doopla" bigger. So that the name of the salon and "Salon" is the focus of the design?

Hello again Dooplasalon,
Thank you, glad you like it, i will try as suggested and upload in very soon

Kindest Regards
Medi

Please check update and let me know what you think: #89 #90 #91

#89, maybe we take out the long part of the "A" and put focus up top and leave salon on the bottom? Play with new fonts maybe?

more update: #97 #98 #99

#97, #99, AWESOME. We love them. Maybe play with the line and make it a color? we're going to have our logo on a neon sign...so it's got to be neon sign compatible...black lettering with just a little bit of pop.

Thank you:)
Please check color options: #100 #101 #102 #103

another one: #104

Hello again Dooplasalon,
I am still open for any revisions, so feel free if you need some

Best Regards
Medi