We like some aspects of your design and would like to ask if you could make a few changes to get it where we need it to be.
1) Could you use the color scheme from #5 or something similar 2) Can you put a line between DontForeclose and SellInstead to seperate them. 3) Can you make the "L"'s and "I" stand apart better because they all look the same and don't read well. 4) Can you give more accent to the shape of the arrows to make them stand out more 5) Can the window panes look more like the lights are on and give it a bit more color.
dear MarkB.... thanks for your feedback and your ranking :) is against the rules to copy designs from other designers..... but in your case you are asking general changes, not specific from any design 1) is possible to change 2) yes, is possible to change because I see that others designers are not using a line to separate the two words 3) obviously is just a little change... not problem 4) I'll try to improve the arrows 5) I'll try to improve the window panes
but to send the changes I need to be ranked first because during the judging period just the designer ranked first can send updates... you can switch the first position anytime
hi Mark... thanks for the chance :) I sent some updates with different variations... please don't mind to ask about any combination of colors or icons.... will be a pleasure
I like #48. Except instead of purple – blue on top and red – green on bottom, maybe do red (Don’t) blue (Foreclose) and purple (Sell) green (Instead). I like the bit of space between the words and the line between top and bottom.