Dodgeball in the DLogo Design Contest

Good day!, here is my first entry.

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new version!

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Updated version

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NEW VERSION

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# 27
Hey, sorry for the lack of feedback before.

I like the style of yours. Can we use the style from entry 27, but instead of the two people holding the balls, could you implement "The Spirit of Detroit" statue? It's arms are similar to this. You could have the body of the statue behind the words Dodgeball in the D, and use it's hands to look like the arms you currently have.

Here is a link to a picture of the "Spirit of Detroit".
https://portfolio.du.edu/pc/port.detail?id=152718

also, above the statue, can you put the text "World Record" and below the IN THE D, put "BREAKING.
Hopefully it would read: World Record Breaking Dodgeball in the D.

I look forward to seeing these. Thanks!

Hi there!, I´m going to start doing the corrections you have requested right away. Thanks a lot!

Hi, here you will find the corrections as you requested. I swapped the colours but this combination seems to be the easiest way for reading. Please have a look and let me know if you want to try something else. Thanks!

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In this option, you will notice that the wording DODGEBALL has been leveled for more pleasant reading!

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I like the updates, just a few changes...

1- Can we change all the blue to black.

2- Can you make the statue a bit more like the actual statue?

3- Can you move the statue down a bit, so his right hand has the O in DODGE in his right hand?

4- For World Record Breaking, can the words be more spread out. Rather than WORLD RECORD being arched over the guys head, can it arch over the entire logo. Same for BREAKING on the bottom.

Really excited to see the next set.

Thanks

I really appreciate all the feedback, sure, all corrections are very easy to achieve but one of them is confusing me, what do you mean changing all the blue to black? or maybe is the other way around? Black to blue?, sorry if my question sounds stupid... actually I feel stupid already, but don't worry... that will last only 2 minutes, hahahahahahahaha!!

Hi, I did the corrections according to your request but the issue about the blue color you asked is still waiting to work it out. As you see I had to increase the font size to barely arch it along the logo itself. I didn't keep the original font size because it was too spread out for reading. So far I would say there is a fighting in between the two wordings, depending on what we want to communicate at first we should keep the WORLD RECORD BREAKING in a smaller size. Please let me know what you think!. Thanks.

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A little change using same circular concept.

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I'm really liking where you are going with 53. Just a couple more updates to finalize it.

-Can you give the "WORLD RECORD BREAKING" a font that pops out more?

-Is it possible to get the statue of the Spirit of Detroit to be more of a picture than a graphic?

- Can you have the world DODGE and BALL be on the same line, rather than offsetting?


Keep up the great work!

Concept updated, please have a look. Thanks.

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Here is a better approach using the ball on top as a letter O.

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I REALLY like what you did with 57 and putting the other ball in the 'O' for Dodgeball.

For the letters in World Record Breaking, can we do something to make it 'pop' more? Maybe it's putting a texture on it, or just making it darker, but the grey seems kind of dull

So i've reviewed these with my partners and they all agree that your design is definitely the one we are going with. Just a couple more final touches:

Since you put the ball in RECORD, can you take off the tailing L's, and keep them standard?

For the WORLD RECORD BREAKING, can we see that in black, to match the word DODGE?

Great job!

Sure no problem, I'll send you the new corrections as soon as I finish them. Thanks a lot!!!!

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These are great!

I'd like to see what #58 and 59 look like if you take BREAKING and make it straight, rather than rounded under the rest of the logo. I think once we see this, we will be able to make our selection.


Thanks!

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Sorry, but the previous one had a bigger font size in BREAKING, please have look. Thanks

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Hi there!

Thanks a lot for your support and all the feedback received until the end of the road. I've sent the images for your final revision, please let me know if you need to add or change anything else before your final approve.

Thanks once again!