Thanks for giving my idea a try. I don't think the fracture works real well. I'm going back to the design before this and am also keeping the one with the open book underneath the heart. Thanks for your efforts. One or both of these are in the final groupings we're considering. Thanks for everything
Simple splitting and moving parts apart made heart shape less readable. I've added a crack dividing the heart instead. Tell mi if you think it's working? That is - couples splitting up / broken heart - both clearly and equally notable. Thanks
Ok, for this one, it's good as is. I know you're working on the heart design as well. Let's finish that one off. The lifesaver design is now fine. No more work needed on it.
Alright, now I see that you changed the colors anyway. That's fine. If we use this design, we can decide which color scheme makes the most sense - the green/blue or the red/green
This image symbolizes the divorce, as you remarked - there was love (heart) but one part of the relationship want to break free. If you want to emphasis the breaking up, maybe I could add a crack line on the heart? but I feel that this image tells story as well. Thanks
I like the shades of blues and greens on this rendition for everything except the blue in the lifesaver. Perhaps we just make the "blue" part of the lifesaver "white". the traditional lifesaver is white with the bands of red. Let's go with white and the bands of green.
I like the colors for the other parts, and like the way you wrapped the slogan around the lifesaver.
OK, looks good as a base for the rest. Let's maybe split the heart a bit by having the two people pull away from each other. The workshops we're providing are meant to help the woman who is going to divorce or is actually divorcing. We're not "repairing" the marriage. We come into the picture once that options has been closed by one or the other participant's actions.
Based on some surveys that are coming back, we've changed the slogan to "the knowledge you need". Can you incorporate the theme of "knowledge" in here without changing the whole design?
Let's get ride of the scissors and dotted line. Also can we include the phrase "the knoweldge that provides hope" around the edge of the lifesaver? I'd like to consider a change of the color scheme as well. Perhaps a muted green (for healing) and then match the blue tone for the green used
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I like the colors for the other parts, and like the way you wrapped the slogan around the lifesaver.
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