I like the sense of movement; the idea of moving to a bigger, better lilly pad. But the frog just doesn't work for me. Can you try an abstract? Also can you try fonts that are a little more distinctive; and not all lower case. Thanks.
Very, very clever. I actually laughed out loud when I saw it. Definitely has the movement thing going for it. I know I'm asking for the impossible, but is there a way to make a subtle reference to real estate; like a roof over the dog's head? Also, what would it look like with the dog to the left of my name, instead of in the middle. I was wondering what it would look like with a black background and a white dog.