Jason,
Look - we really like your design
#87. Before we declare
#87 the winner I'd like to work with you on some possible changes and different looks.
First - we have developed a unique strategy that will provide us an edge in the industry. Accordingly, we are seriously considering a tag line along the lines of "The DHC Edge..." While developing this tag line a saber came to mind. A saber ties in the idea of "Edge" and "West Point".
Here is my first request - could please provide an "edge like" version of the horizontal line in 87? I thought this might give us an awesome tie in between the logo, the tag line, and the West Point heritage. I was thinking along the lines of a bevelled edge.... Not sure if it will work but we'd at least like to see you take a stab.
Second - can you provide a version of 87 in all gold with black background. We haven't determine if we are going to use black business cards at this point. A marketing resource felt there is more brand value in gold letters vs white letters. So we are still evaluating black background vs white and then what the right combination of gold, white, and black is for the letters.
Thanks so much for your powerful but simple design. I think you hit it right on the head. Congratulations!!! Gold #2 coming your way.
Great to work with a fellow christian - Tom (the other partner)