#2 It's bold and daring! Like I mentioned to the others, I don't have much vertical room to spare, so I need to locate the hexagon figure portion of the logo behind the text so the the height of the whole thing is minimal. The wings (are they wings?) off to the side are a bit too much I think. And the amount of grey seems to wash it out for me a bit. Not enough contrast. I'm noticing the letter 'O' is nice and round. Can you take advantage of that and make that letter a hexagon or something? Stick a paper think cross through it? Just thinking out loud.
Thank you very much for your reply! Sorry for the delay but just saw your comment this morning. I've followed your suggestion and I'm using a blue tone more bolder. I think the wing gives a bit of style to it but if you want to see it without or make any colour suggestions please do. Now ot's a wider disposition. Good luck for your contest and have a great weekend,
This is a marked improvement over the first design, Claudia. Thanks. I need the words of the slogan to run underneath the whole thing along the width of the logo. Perhaps a thin line running between Deus Possibilium and the slogan underneath would work. I'm not convinced about the wings either. I'll think on it. I might be open to the idea of those three wings coming off the top of the letter "O", perhaps in the shape of a flame even. And is there any way that the letter "O" itself can be a hexagon? I'm just throwing out ideas. I'd very much like to include the hexagon into the design.
Thank you for your new feedback :-) here you go as per your suggestion. If anything is still needed, just let me know. have a great weekend and regards,